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Revising
Take
Breaks - Get enough distance from your initial efforts to see
your words clearly. The longer you wait between the process of rough
drafting and revising the more accurate and dispassionate your judgments
will be.
Avoid Nausea - Learn when NOT to revise. As writing guru
Peter Elbow suggests, if the mere site of your draft makes you ill,
then it is time to put the pages away until another day.
Layer Changes - Rework your words gradually and in different
stages. When you're in the first rough draft phases, avoid polishing
as you go. Wait until you've got a large chunk complete before tweaking
specific sentences. Reviewing entire sections, rather than trying
to perfect your paragraphs as you go, will keep your style more
consistent and flowing.
Apply Blinders - When revising, look at one aspect of your
writing at a time. Ignore the forest for the trees and vice versa.
For example, start by reading through the manuscript making sure
that each paragraph consists of cogent, grammatically correct, complete
sentences. Then, step back and review the section for it's overall
meaning, coherence and eloquence. It is difficult to keep macro-
and micro- tasks in mind at the same time.
Rest Regularly - Maintain your overall motivation with breaks
and vacations from your work. Even a single work-free day can help
you gain perspective. Stepping back from your work and letting your
unconscious rather than conscious mind mull over issues, is especially
useful when you are grappling with scholarly problems.
Seek Feedback - Get recommendations from many sources and
at many stages of the writing process. When you are a student, you
write for a single audience - the professor. When you are a successful
academic, your audience becomes as large as possible. Seek comments
and advice from as many people.
Expose Early - Never try to perfect your work before seeking
feedback. Show your work at beginning phases, starting with an outline.
When authors have slaved over each word before showing their work,
they are understandably reluctant to make changes. You will be more
open to constructive critiques if you get advice early on. Save
your more critical audiences for later drafts (i.e. get feedback
from peers before showing dissertation sections to your chair).
Start with friends who will be gentle with your early efforts.
Pick Your Critics - Develop a cohort of readers who specialize
in different areas. For example, you may exchange drafts with a
colleague who is great at spotting conceptual weaknesses, another
who is a grammar maven, a third who will zero in on statistical
nuances. The more people who read your work, the more sophisticated
and well-rounded your product will be.
Request Support - Ask for specific kinds of suggestions.
Never be afraid to ask for positive feedback- especially from highly
critical mentors. It is valid to ask a reader what they liked about
your manuscript. You may say, "Please let me know areas where
my argument is clear and well-argued." It can be unnecessarily
discouraging to receive comments only about the flaws in your work.
Whenever possible, avoid over-critical reviewers who will discourage
rather than motivate you.
Exert Extra Steps - Give yourself the time to fine tune
your drafts. Be sure to read over the completed manuscript in its
entirety before sending it off. You may pick up previously unnoticed
glaring errors when you make that final pass. Writers who procrastinate,
and finish work just in time to meet deadlines, deprive themselves
of the space to polish their work adequately.
Avoid Over-polishing - On the other hand, avoid perfectionism.
When you find yourself changing the same sentence over and over,
only to end up with your original version, you are going to far.
Learn when to let go and move on. Academics who attempt to produce
flawless work rarely publish enough to get tenure.
Contribute Generously - When you write a dissertation, paper
or book, remember that you are contributing to an ongoing scholarly
dialogue rather than producing the ultimate, definitive conclusion.
You don't have to worry about having your ideas "stolen",
or your work "scooped." Think of your work as adding an
interesting point to a continuing discussion: this attitude will
help you avoid grandiosity and perfectionism. There is no single,
correct way to approach a topic. We each have a unique voice. Every
answer creates new questions. No one ever has the final word.
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